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[Mockthrough 1: Kirby]

Sadly i could only give a 2.5 on this, the animation itself was just... too little for a dry joke to make up for it.
the voicing was clean yet it didn't feel quite right.
now i know what u are thinking, this new guy with absolutely nothing to show for telling me what he thinks...
It is NOT my intention to dis your animation, i write my reviews in comparison with good animations and what i feel is fair and helps you to improve yourself.
As a matter of fact i AM an artist myself and i feel you have a nice drawing style, you could do so much more with this, you have potential and i hope my review and those of others will help you improve that talent.

DigressingNSQ responds:

Hey, I do appreciate the detailed and honest feedback. It is comments like yours that I always hope to see whenever I put up any of my work for critique.

Thanks a bunch!